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Yes, I am lacking
the physical beauty you
possess in the eyes
of the shallow men
you use for your private lies,
but I don't flaunt my
mind over the girls, like you,
who lack beautiful brains.
This piece speaks for itself.
You know exactly what I'm talking about.
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SilverInkblot Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know that I've featured this piece in my journal :)
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themagpiepoet Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! x
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alex-sukehiro Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh, I love this so much. 
It's not a lengthy tirade or treatise on the power of brains and the shallowness of the physical. It is short, brutal, and ends on such an amazingly beautiful line. 

You, madam, are amazing. :) And you have a beautiful brain! :D
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themagpiepoet Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. :glomp: x
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wolfwithapaintbrush Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this. It reads fast and punchy and does, indeed, get the point across clearly and efficiently. The speed of the delivery and abrupt end gave me the impression of this being thrown over a shoulder while walking away from a confrontation.  
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themagpiepoet Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is exactly the moment I thought this piece up! I was in a car with two girls and three guys (including my now boyfriend), there wasn't enough space in the car and someone was going to have to take the train. I was pulled from the car and sent on my way. The only motivation I can think of for selecting me to leave is that the driver knew I wouldn't let him satisfy himself with my body, whereas he'd have more of a chance with the other girls. I punched him in the face and shouted the points I make in the piece at him, then walked off and wrote this on the train. So, yes, your impression is accurate! x
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wolfwithapaintbrush Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good for you! I can see where the emotion in this piece came from!    
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:iconkillerlord123:
Brains win over beauty any day in my book.
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themagpiepoet Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear it! :glomp: x
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