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Yes, I am lacking
the physical beauty you
possess in the eyes
of the shallow men
you use for your private lies,
but I don't flaunt my
mind over the girls, like you,
who lack beautiful brains.
This piece speaks for itself.
You know exactly what I'm talking about.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I put the piece in my "to comment on" folder awhile back and this is truly gorgeous. :heart:
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themagpiepoet Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :blowkiss:. x
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, Lala.
I sent you a message on FB a little while ago. Just wanted to let you know that if you ever need to talk someone I don't mind listening. Since it's been a while, you may not remember who I am on there but I'm Ricky. :huggle:
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themagpiepoet Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I remember :), and thank you :glomp:. x
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
No problem, of course. :huggle:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know that I've featured this piece in my journal :)
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themagpiepoet Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! x
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alex-sukehiro Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh, I love this so much. 
It's not a lengthy tirade or treatise on the power of brains and the shallowness of the physical. It is short, brutal, and ends on such an amazingly beautiful line. 

You, madam, are amazing. :) And you have a beautiful brain! :D
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themagpiepoet Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. :glomp: x
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wolfwithapaintbrush Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this. It reads fast and punchy and does, indeed, get the point across clearly and efficiently. The speed of the delivery and abrupt end gave me the impression of this being thrown over a shoulder while walking away from a confrontation.  
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